Tanisha Iraheta
Monday, November 14, 2011
Critique my romance story opening?
It's intriguing, I'll admit, but it's wordy in parts. Go through all of your modifiers and ask yourself, "Is this really necessary for the meaning of the story. Other than that I enjoyed and would be interesting to see how it plays out
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